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写作想变强，先把「编辑」当成第二份工作

写作的大幅进步不靠更聪明的句子，而靠一套反直觉但可复制的“可读性流程”。

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核心观点

  • 在手机上校对：用读者的视角杀掉废话 70%+ 阅读发生在手机端；移动端会逼你重视排版、可扫读性（skimmability），不然读者扫一眼就走。
  • 写和改必须分开：给文字一个“冷却期” 刚写完你会自恋；隔 24 小时再编辑，能更客观地切掉自嗨段落。
  • 朗读是最便宜的质量检测 气喘/卡壳的位置就是结构或句子的问题；先听出来，再重写。
  • 像说话一样写：可说=可读 难以说出口的文字一定难读；先口述转写，再用转写稿当提纲。
  • 写给一个人解决一个问题 + 拒绝耍聪明 “写给所有人=写给没人”；清晰 > 机灵，困惑的读者会立刻离开。

跟我们的关联

### 👤ATou 做品牌/内容输出时，最值钱的是“让人看得下去”的可读性工程，而不是辞藻。把流程固化，你会稳定产出而不是靠状态。

讨论引子

1. 你最近一次写作“没人读”，主要死在内容、结构、还是可扫读性？ 2. 你写的对象是谁？如果只能选 1 个具体人，你会改哪几句话？ 3. 你写作里最常见的“自嗨句子”长什么样？

5 分钟内让你的写作提升 10 倍

在 2025 年，我的小写作生意创造了 $8,000,000。

而让这一切成为可能的，就是这一项策略：

持续在网上稳定发布内容。

但刚开始的时候，没人读我的文字。

我也不怪他们。

那时我写得很糟，确实不值得一读。

后来我找到了这 6 条任何人都能用的可执行建议，能让写作提升 10 倍：

技巧 #1：在与你写作不同的屏幕上校对。

大多数人在电脑上写作、编辑，从没考虑过手机端。

但如今，至少 70% 的阅读发生在手机上。

因此，当你用读者正在使用的同一种设备去编辑时，你会获得一种全新的视角，让你清清楚楚地看到哪些地方需要删掉或重写。

它也会迫使你把排版与可扫读性放在首位。

在互联网上（尤其是在手机上），人们并不会真正“阅读”。

他们是在“扫读”！

然后，他们才会读。

如果你在他们扫读时不给他们继续往下看的理由，他们就不会考虑认真读下去。

技巧 #2：在不同时间写作与编辑。

我曾以为写作和编辑是一回事，但它们其实是两套不同的流程。

而且刚写完不久，你总会觉得自己的文章挺不错，因为那就是你刚写出来的！

所以，给它一点“呼吸”的时间。

写完之后，等 24 小时。

然后在它还没准备好之前，就点下发布。

技巧 #3：把你的文章朗读出来。

文字里那些别扭的地方很难用眼睛看出来——有时候必须用耳朵听出来。

因此在朗读时，留意你在哪些地方会喘不过气来。

这通常意味着你写了连写的长句——把它们合并起来。

然后再注意你在哪些词句上会磕绊。

现在，把这些地方重写一遍。

技巧 #4：像说话一样写作。

当你把一段文字读出声时，99% 的情况下你会发现它很难说出口。

而难以说出口的文字，也很难读下去。

所以，把你说的话原样转写下来。

再用这份转写稿，作为你下一篇文章的提纲。

技巧 #5：写给 1 个具体的人，解决 1 个具体的问题。

我以前总想写给所有人——不愿因为写得具体，就把某些读者排除在外。

但写给所有人，等于谁也写不到。

所以现在，我会回答这 6 个问题：

我在解决什么问题？

这是谁的问题？

是什么情绪？

我在解锁哪些收益？

我在创造什么个人意义？

我在生成什么意义？

读者采取行动的最大理由是什么？

技巧 #6：克制你想耍聪明的每一次冲动。

你是在和 Netflix、TikTok 争夺注意力。

不知为何，很多人觉得抓住注意力的最佳方式，就是机灵或搞笑。

但这只会让读者困惑。

而困惑的读者会立刻离开。

就是这样！

快速回顾一下：

在与你写作不同的屏幕上校对。

在不同时间写作与编辑。

把你的文章朗读出来。

像说话一样写作。

写给 1 个具体的人，解决 1 个具体的问题。

克制你想耍聪明的每一次冲动。

关注 @dickiebush，获取更多类似文章。

也请转发这篇内容，让我们能把它分享给更多人 ✊

链接：http://x.com/i/article/2016107489872510979

相关笔记

In 2025, my little writing business generated $8,000,000.

在 2025 年，我的小写作生意创造了 $8,000,000。

And this 1 strategy made it possible:

而让这一切成为可能的，就是这一项策略：

Publishing content consistently online.

持续在网上稳定发布内容。

But when I first started, no one read my writing.

但刚开始的时候，没人读我的文字。

And I don't blame them.

我也不怪他们。

At the time, I was a terrible writer not worth reading.

那时我写得很糟，确实不值得一读。

Then I found these 6 actionable tips anyone can use to 10x their writing:

后来我找到了这 6 条任何人都能用的可执行建议，能让写作提升 10 倍：

Tip #1: Proofread on a different screen than the one you wrote.

技巧 #1：在与你写作不同的屏幕上校对。

Most people write & edit on their desktop and never consider mobile.

大多数人在电脑上写作、编辑，从没考虑过手机端。

But these days, at least 70% of reading happens on a phone.

但如今，至少 70% 的阅读发生在手机上。

So when you edit from the same device your readers are using, you gain a new perspective that makes it painfully obvious what to cut or rewrite.

因此，当你用读者正在使用的同一种设备去编辑时，你会获得一种全新的视角，让你清清楚楚地看到哪些地方需要删掉或重写。

It also puts formatting & skimmability top of mind.

它也会迫使你把排版与可扫读性放在首位。

On the internet (and on phones especially), people don't "read."

在互联网上（尤其是在手机上），人们并不会真正“阅读”。

They SKIМ!

他们是在“扫读”！

Then, they read.

然后，他们才会读。

And if you don't give them a reason to keep reading while they skim, they won't consider reading.

如果你在他们扫读时不给他们继续往下看的理由，他们就不会考虑认真读下去。

Tip #2: Write and edit at different times.

技巧 #2：在不同时间写作与编辑。

I used to think writing and editing were the same thing, but they're different processes.

我曾以为写作和编辑是一回事，但它们其实是两套不同的流程。

And your writing will always look good shortly after writing it because you just wrote it!

而且刚写完不久，你总会觉得自己的文章挺不错，因为那就是你刚写出来的！

So, give it time to breathe.

所以，给它一点“呼吸”的时间。

Write and then wait 24 hours.

写完之后，等 24 小时。

Then hit publish before it's ready.

然后在它还没准备好之前，就点下发布。

Tip #3: Read your writing aloud.

技巧 #3：把你的文章朗读出来。

It's hard to see the clunky bits in your writing—sometimes you have to hear them.

文字里那些别扭的地方很难用眼睛看出来——有时候必须用耳朵听出来。

So when reading aloud, listen for where you are out of breath.

因此在朗读时，留意你在哪些地方会喘不过气来。

This often means you have run-on sentences-combine them.

这通常意味着你写了连写的长句——把它们合并起来。

Then look for when you stumble over words.

然后再注意你在哪些词句上会磕绊。

Now, rewrite them.

现在，把这些地方重写一遍。

Tip #4: Write like you talk.

技巧 #4：像说话一样写作。

When you read something aloud, 99% of the time, you will find it hard to speak.

当你把一段文字读出声时，99% 的情况下你会发现它很难说出口。

And writing that is hard to speak is hard to read.

而难以说出口的文字，也很难读下去。

So, transcribe yourself talking.

所以，把你说的话原样转写下来。

Then use the transcription as the outline for your next piece of writing.

再用这份转写稿，作为你下一篇文章的提纲。

Tip #5: Write to 1 specific person to solve 1 specific problem.

技巧 #5：写给 1 个具体的人，解决 1 个具体的问题。

I used to try & write for everyone—never wanting to cut out a reader by being specific.

我以前总想写给所有人——不愿因为写得具体，就把某些读者排除在外。

But writing for everyone means writing for no one.

但写给所有人，等于谁也写不到。

So now, I answer these 6 questions:

所以现在，我会回答这 6 个问题：

What problem am I solving?

我在解决什么问题？

Whose problem is it?

这是谁的问题？

What emotion?

是什么情绪？

What benefits am I unlocking?

我在解锁哪些收益？

What personal meaning am I making?

我在创造什么个人意义？

What meaning am I generating?

我在生成什么意义？

What’s the biggest reason my reader should take action?

读者采取行动的最大理由是什么？

Tip #6: Resist every urge to be clever.

技巧 #6：克制你想耍聪明的每一次冲动。

You're competing with Netflix & TikTok for attention.

你是在和 Netflix、TikTok 争夺注意力。

And for some reason, people think the best way to capture attention is to be clever or funny.

不知为何，很多人觉得抓住注意力的最佳方式，就是机灵或搞笑。

But this leads to a confused reader.

但这只会让读者困惑。

And a confused reader is gone.

而困惑的读者会立刻离开。

That’s it!

就是这样！

Here’s a quick recap:

快速回顾一下：

Proofread on a different screen than the one you wrote.

在与你写作不同的屏幕上校对。

Write and edit at different times.

在不同时间写作与编辑。

Read your writing aloud.

把你的文章朗读出来。

Write like you talk.

像说话一样写作。

Write to 1 specific person to solve 1 specific problem.

写给 1 个具体的人，解决 1 个具体的问题。

Resist every urge to be clever.

克制你想耍聪明的每一次冲动。

Follow @dickiebush for more articles like this.

关注 @dickiebush，获取更多类似文章。

And repost this so we can share it with others ✊

也请转发这篇内容，让我们能把它分享给更多人 ✊

Link: http://x.com/i/article/2016107489872510979

链接：http://x.com/i/article/2016107489872510979

相关笔记

How To 10x Your Writing In The Next 5 Minutes

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Content

In 2025, my little writing business generated $8,000,000.

And this 1 strategy made it possible:

Publishing content consistently online.

But when I first started, no one read my writing.

And I don't blame them.

At the time, I was a terrible writer not worth reading.

Then I found these 6 actionable tips anyone can use to 10x their writing:

Tip #1: Proofread on a different screen than the one you wrote.

Most people write & edit on their desktop and never consider mobile.

But these days, at least 70% of reading happens on a phone.

So when you edit from the same device your readers are using, you gain a new perspective that makes it painfully obvious what to cut or rewrite.

It also puts formatting & skimmability top of mind.

On the internet (and on phones especially), people don't "read."

They SKIМ!

Then, they read.

And if you don't give them a reason to keep reading while they skim, they won't consider reading.

Tip #2: Write and edit at different times.

I used to think writing and editing were the same thing, but they're different processes.

And your writing will always look good shortly after writing it because you just wrote it!

So, give it time to breathe.

Write and then wait 24 hours.

Then hit publish before it's ready.

Tip #3: Read your writing aloud.

It's hard to see the clunky bits in your writing—sometimes you have to hear them.

So when reading aloud, listen for where you are out of breath.

This often means you have run-on sentences-combine them.

Then look for when you stumble over words.

Now, rewrite them.

Tip #4: Write like you talk.

When you read something aloud, 99% of the time, you will find it hard to speak.

And writing that is hard to speak is hard to read.

So, transcribe yourself talking.

Then use the transcription as the outline for your next piece of writing.

Tip #5: Write to 1 specific person to solve 1 specific problem.

I used to try & write for everyone—never wanting to cut out a reader by being specific.

But writing for everyone means writing for no one.

So now, I answer these 6 questions:

What problem am I solving?

Whose problem is it?

What emotion?

What benefits am I unlocking?

What personal meaning am I making?

What meaning am I generating?

What’s the biggest reason my reader should take action?

Tip #6: Resist every urge to be clever.

You're competing with Netflix & TikTok for attention.

And for some reason, people think the best way to capture attention is to be clever or funny.

But this leads to a confused reader.

And a confused reader is gone.

That’s it!

Here’s a quick recap:

Proofread on a different screen than the one you wrote.

Write and edit at different times.

Read your writing aloud.

Write like you talk.

Write to 1 specific person to solve 1 specific problem.

Resist every urge to be clever.

Follow @dickiebush for more articles like this.

And repost this so we can share it with others ✊

Link: http://x.com/i/article/2016107489872510979

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